Let me say your icon is hauntingly beautiful and captured me instantly.

I was flowing along swimmingly with your verse until I hit a bump with not letting no one direct me, did you intend for this to happen?

Then as I righted my vessel and continued my journey I fell out of my boat at allow your to breathe, which I am sure was meant to mean “allow you to breathe”.

I am blessed to read your words and so are you.

A nice message to it. “Sun” twice in a row in the first two lines, so that might benefit from a tweak.

Oh thank you @ Sir Bic. I absolutely love my icon, and I’m appreciative that you noticed it as well