Eeegh. Creepy. All of the noises you described were shudder-worthy. This was grade-A, and very enjoyable, contrary to the morbid concept.
Yes, I agree with Kihd. You described a very nice visual of a gross scene, indeed! Not only did you do the onomatopoeia really well, you almost made me smell it, without even writing what it smelled like. (pukes) Nicely done.
Yes, I agree with Kihd. You described a very nice visual of a gross scene, indeed! Not only did you do the onomatopoeia really well, you almost made me smell it, without even writing what it smelled like. (pukes)
Nicely done.
Kihd 
Sir Bic