First, I thought, What hospital closes for the evening?.. then my brain processed the information a bit more thoroughly and said ’ you can’t leave that in a comment!’ Here’s what it told me to write: Your story ended rather abruptly. There were some choppy parts. However, as a true event, that had to be a harrowing experience. It’s the small things, like the policy, that get to us in life, make us frustrated, and that we look back on and laugh. “Really? I sweated over that?”

Ok, well I was hoping for a fluffy animal story here, thinking this was a trip to the vet, but as it turned out, I was sorely disappointed.

Hey maybe not! A cat can take a cab can’t it? =[)

Funny little story. Kind of straight-forward or even simplistic telling, like you might tell to a friend over drinks. Not necessarily a bad thing but not a ‘knock my socks off with your writing’ thing either.