sweet and filled with all kinds of love beyond death (even the creepy kind) feeling.

This is either really sad, or extremely grotesque.

If on the sad side, I think of a drowning with seagulls “singing” overhead.

If on the grotesque side, I think some fetishes are matter not described.

Let’s hope for a drowning. =[)

It has great descriptions and even a snippet of a story in such a short space. And the sparse use of rhyme is wonderful. A little rhyme goes a long way. You use it like a seasoning, m’wah! And the outcome is devilishly delicious. haha, good job.

It’s more than creepy.. it’s dark and devilish, yet sweet and sublime. It is about love beyond death, but death is the thing that makes it so chilling, because we feel averse to it.

This is why I don’t add tags. I love the interpretations. Thanks everyone :)

Ew, that was pretty gross, but nicely written.

congrats on the feature and you really hit this one out the park

Damn the phantom 1 pencil protagonist has attacked again!