Enlightening. No one wants to die. – You rhymed that well, Tad The first three stanzas read very strongly. The last four; not as much, but a very efficient elegy altogether.
Enlightening.
No one wants to die. – You rhymed that well, Tad
The first three stanzas read very strongly. The last four; not as much, but a very efficient elegy altogether.
If I’m correct, this is about dying and going to Heaven. God do I love this. My favorite line is the first: “Why am I a part of time?” Good to see you back. :)
If I’m correct, this is about dying and going to Heaven. God do I love this. My favorite line is the first: “Why am I a part of time?”
Good to see you back. :)
Sir Bic 
Kihd