I feel like Haiku’s are the hardest form of poetry to write well without them coming off as silly, irreverent, or over done. You’ve done great with all three of these, I especially like the last one. Thanks for sharing.

I adore the first two, but the last seems just kinda “meh” to me.

Lovely trio, especially with the last one offering a ray of hope to the otherwise dark tone. I really liked the first one too.

They are lovely, all of them in their own right. I think people are trying to read them together as a composition painting. Therein lies the uneasiness.

I love them all… I can’t write these, I’ve tried, it just doesn’t work for me.