Welcome, Sandy and Pockets! It’s nice to have you join us.

Thanks for continuing this MJY. Maybe it will inspire PJ to take it up again?

Nice section! But I think the first line needs a bit of work: using ‘she’ twice throws the whole line off balance and sounds kinda childish, plus I feel like the moment could be more monumental. Just sayin how I feel. I also think you overuse the word ‘and’ — a strange point I realise.

The rest of it… I love the detail it’s fabulous. I just wonder why she’s stopping.

I gotta start on my sequel.

ilove sandy and pockets two more star crossed lovers in this great story and in our own real life adventures now immortalized. maybe juliet needed a lil distance from her own story,nothing strengthens a love story like a lil distance.

i like the sign. I want an old t-shirt that says that.. :P