I love it! I like how it’s so much different from the prequel, but can still fit into it if you’ve read both. It can stand on its own.

Yeah!

awesome descriptions! I agree with bespectacled.

Funny. - strange and haha.

“Bear Garden – Corvette timbers” – and maybe even a Tasmanian Devil sighting! – Nice.

Way more serious than I would have guessed from the preceding story. Great job. I read too quickly and missed a bit, but it all worked nicely on the second read through.

Great sequel. Very descriptive. I like :)