According to the copy my mom so diligently stored, this was written in 2000, when I was 5 and in preschool.XD
I could also remember the first song I ever wrote, about Rainbows, and how they have 7 colors.

Cute.

“THE END” – I remember when I did that too. []o)

thanks for sharing that.

Thanks for the comment Mr. Abran!

I can’t believe how quickly this came to my mind when I saw the challenge. I’m glad you liked it.:D

I was thinking that this belonged to that nonsense challenge by Silven, but then I saw the challenge this really belongs to…

My bad, but it is really well-written for a preschooler! Cute story. I would love for the last paragraph to happen to me and my family.

Don’t we all?

Thanks for the comment, zx. :D

This rivals my latest short stories in imagination and even grammar! Hhaha. Very fun to read these young thoughts. Mangoes, scattered, collected— great vocabulary for a pre-schooler.

When I dug it up and read it, I did notice how seemingly advanced the vocabulary is. I started to doubt whether or not this was really just plain old me without help from anyone.
But then I remembered when I was in grade 1 and talked with my teacher about Continental Drift, so never mind.XD

You can forgive mangoes. They’re sufficiently abundant here where we live.

Thanks for the comment.:D

never underestimate the brainpower of a preschooler.. :)

This. Is. Perfect.*

I was also five in 2000, and I don’t think I could even spell my own name yet. Bravo, J. Rein. B

Avert your gaze from that arbitrary asterisk in my preceding comment. :)

LOL!! I totally did stuff like this when i was in pre k, LUVERS IT!!

The story was so cute.

I love it. I can remember how my younger brother says things like that.