Dystopian! I like! Here, a picture of too much control, which reminds me of the Hunger Games series. I like the use of capital letters, which I tried to use in a work of mine and was shot down for. I kept them anyway. :) You should too.
I would love to know your reasoning for all the proper nouns. I think they represent a world of self-importance or self-prominence where Title Holders care, but the Common People, don’t. A world like that doesn’t seem so far off into the future.
One thing, if Jessica had lived in this world for a time, I’d think her notion of “entertained” would have passed after months or even years. I know mine would have.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Sir Bic