That last ‘you’ could use some capitals! “I wish YOU had a bully!” I just hear him so frustrated that he says it rudely and immediately regrets it. Though he may just say it under his breath, or in his mind in which case italics would be more appropriate. Still wondering if its worth it to join their group.. :)
ElshaHawk, you understand that I am trying to utilize more than just letters to express emotion. Punctuation is so important to me, I like to pay careful attention to their use and you make a great suggestion. I will change it now, it works. Thanks for noticing and giving great advice.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
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