This is my first writing in over 2 years, so if it is rough sorry. I am going to be making this my final series, and hanging up my pen after it is done. I want to make this as good as I can, but I am very busy person so sorry for any errors or any mistakes.

No worries mate.

Your story is really good. I think “nowhere” is one word and “Hey sis, mom…” needs a comma, but besides that – I’m good with it.

I’d like to recommend that you write whenever you can; don’t hang the pen up. Ficly needs you.

-Sir Bic

This is a good set-up. I hope you continue this because I’m anxious to see where this is going. You writing is good.