PJ, you certainly have a way with words! I appreciate you gently forcing me to ponder what you write

Here’s what I think you’re saying in this piece: The regurgitation of an unwelcomed thought can be most unpleasant.

Was this an “after” thought”? Just in case you hadn’t noticed, there are a couple of “afters” going on here. []o)

Thanks! I feel like explaining poems kinda damages them, because it affects the first impression of the reader, and the first impression is very important, as are the interpretations a reader gets ^^
If ya wanna know what it’s really about feel free to not me though :P

heh. yeah. mhm. gruesome. It’s just brutal the way you put it. nicely done.