This is really great. From the structure of the words and rhymes to the visuals and stories they impart— all of it comes together. You weave the disparate pieces of this city scene together with the proximity that they occur in. Awesome stuff.

You paint your words with Van Gogh-esque charm. I am reminded of my favorite of his, the Café Terrace at Night. The amber light forming subtle shadows over the tables and chairs and behind the people walking the bright cobblestone streets.
Oh, Secrets of the slick sick streets is very good too.