Ooo, so terrible and ironic. If only…

Thanks for the sequel!

Yep, that’s about what happened in the movie I referenced in my comment on smdasilva’s portion. Definitely the down side to taking such a step. That first sentence keeps bugging me but hard to say why. It might just be a rhythm thing, or maybe the “that sat in the corner” seems redundant, like you could maybe get away with “the radio in the corner”. I don’t think it’s a rule or anything, just a style point. Great job throwing a sequel on there!

I agree, Sir Tim. Wholeheartedly. I rattled out this ficly without really thinking about it, and even then it bothered me. It’s been changed. For the better, I hope.