I thought the first half had a lot of promise, maybe with a little more clarification of what they are up to that Chuck needs to yell. The second half just seemed jumbled together and disconnected. Lots of potential, but it feels like two separate things mushed together.

I agree with THX about the disconnect. I wasn’t really sure where it came from or where it was going, but some of the lines are just begging for more to be written.