Very exciting and tense straight through. Nicely done, especially finding her a way out with the help of her holographic friend. Great installment—pure action!

those insects got big.. I thought they were small in the last installment, I guess bug things could buzz too, or maybe I imagined the buzzing..
I like that she used the air shaft, but would it be cheating to have Brian gesticulate?
The first sentence threw me.. alien limbs.. you described it much better in the second sentence.
Great job throwing the cucumber smell and the rebellious attitude back in!

oh wait.. their limbs, her limbs.. too many limbs.. one could be appendages..

Nice addition to this fantastically fun and futuristic series. I’m so glad Dakota (Dakotah) made it out and away from those ever-growing insects with all her limbs intact. Can’t wait to hear what happens next!

ha-ha! – More Cucumber – nice tag. []o)

I didnt notice all those limbs.. hmm. Also the size slipped my mind but yes they are growing lol.
Thanks THX, and cheers Sir Bic.