Well done. The fight sequence seems very real (a good challenge entry), as does the non-committal attitude of the crowd. It’s an unfortunate truth that rarely does anyone step up to be a hero in this instance.

I know, it is depressing to see how no one ever stands up for the victim in cases like these. I know that even though this is a a story and it has a stronger meaning than a good read, it probably won’t do anything. No one will act on it.