Lol! Poor little lackey. In the second paragraph, maybe change the sentence to “…doesn’t want me to – It’s a curse. Or maybe just a misfortune.” I think that’s give it more UMPH :P great sequel! Way to keep it entertaining!
Hehehe, I love it when lackeys get to escape the villain. Just one small thing to point out — it’s on the LAM, not the lamb. On the lamb brings some really unsettling visions to mind.
Blossom Ruoquen (LoA)
Clockwork Soul