wonderfully disturbed. my mind is a complete wreak now. thanks a lot PJ. []o)

You’re clearly writing from a visceral place, and I can feel it. The last line is the best.

separates OUR outstretched arms?
the promised minute adds more desperation, because now you want to make it count/ last.

This is beautiful. I wish too. I mean, I know how that feels… and the fact that it’s so short makes it all the more perfect.

I agree with Tad Winslow, and I would recommend giving us something that is unique to your situation. Details always help make the feeling more concrete and less cliche.

For me, details mess things up.
I always say people who want to know details can message me.

I just can’t get over this. I keep coming back to it…