Nicely done. Understanding each others issues is one of the hardest parts of a relationship. You’ve told that well. I can’t help but think, though that the teller of this verse is a Native American – the “Wounded Knee”? []o)

Nice little poem. I liked the line about putting up the wall to see it fall—not an uncommon sort of thing, however often it backfires.

I know that wall! it’s hard to see our own faults, and it’s through this tinted glass we view the world, stumbling and bumping our shins into coffeetables instead of seeking counsel to guide us around them. ;)