I liked the emotions. Humor is so helpful in situations like these..it helps ease out the tension. And the usual human emotions, fear, ego and fearlessness..all put together very well. And it compliments the ongoing story too…the prequels.. Nice!

don’t know if you noticed, I had fun inserting true fact into your fiction. Ir required research. And I had three Ficly screens open. One for each or the prequels and the one I was writing. A lot of fun! I want to return and add more.

(Somehow the comment pencil is messed up. My cursor high lighted one of them and, even though I reloaded the page without submitting it, it still registered.)