I love the description of this moment. However, I will hold off the rest of my commentary until you answer one of my “stupid American girl” questions.. what is a malteser?
Maltesers are a confectionery product manufactured by Mars, Incorporated. Maltesers consist of a roughly spherical malt honeycomb centre, surrounded by Milk chocolate. They are most popular in the UK, Australia, Ireland, Canada, and Portugal.[citation needed] Maltesers are sold in a variety of packaging, including plastic bags (ranging in size from small ‘fun-size’ upwards), larger cardboard boxes and tubes, and plastic buckets (ranging in size from medium to very large). They also have medium sized “teasers” in celebrations boxes. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maltesers
I’m resisting the urge to say something… still resisting… okay I’m good. So basically, it’s chocolate covered honeycomb?
On to the rest then. I love your word choices. The specific words you choose – “ambled” was the first that popped out at me – really paint the details in a way that I feel like I’m there. And now that I know what they are, I feel like I can taste the candy :)
Short list – This piece was one of the more evocative ones. You used great description to drag the reader kicking and screaming into the moment. I, as a challenger, love description and emotion in entries, and this was rich with both.
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