Ooh, cliffhanger. Can’t wait for a sequel![driveby or puppy eyes comment?]

Only thing I have to nit-pick: the first time Max is referenced he’s called “Sir.” That doesn’t quite sit well with me, personally.
Other than that, we gots to wing it from here… yay winging it!

Hmmm… I see where you’re coming from, Gwen. I guess it doesn’t really work the way I wanted it to. changes

I don’t think here’s a good place for the house’s description, like we were thinking. I’m going to take this opportunity to tag and ask you to sequel… pretty please? =D

So, what d’y’reckon, Orange: d’y’think I could’ve taken longer for me to sequel?

Now that I say that, it probably could’ve…

Anywho, you’re it! ^^