This is awesome. My son played capture the flag last night with a church group and this totally captures the spirit of that game!

I love capture the flag! We play it at my theatre troupe’s lock in, but through the whole school with all the lights out, it’s epic.

I loved the voice of the narrator, it was so real, I could hear this kid talking. The grammar and syntax of someone from that age group, but well done, not forced.

Great job!

Bob, only you could write a Ficly titled ‘Sudden Death’ that would make me smile after reading it. You just might be a modern-day Mark Twain. – I love it.

Most dramatic game of ‘capture the flag’ ever. Reads like a gritty war drama, though still winds up looking like a teenage or young adult game of ‘steal the bacon’. Very fun and a good read.

Nice work, Bob. I don’t think I can add any new praise here, so please accept my pencils as a poor substitute.

Found it!

You won! It’s like ‘capture the flag’. I call it ‘find the story’. Profound, I know.