Comments on Jurassic by Sir Bic

Bob Liddil

This is brilliant!

Was it written perhaps in behalf of a triceritops? :-D

An elegant response to a difficult challenge.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
someday_93

Oh, I was thinking T-Rex, since it says Rex… but I definitely got dinosaur as well.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
smdasilva {LoA}

@Bob – cause triceratops can’t type :)

Love it. 7th paragraph should be “stumble”, not “stubble”
- Posted over 8 years ago.
jonjon

I enjoyed that. Sir bic, the T-rex slayer!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
jonjon

I enjoyed that. Sir bic, the T-rex slayer!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Sir Bic

Bob, you’re too kind.

someday_93, T-Rex vs. Tritops

smdasilva, maybe he forgot to shave? (fixed)

jonjon, Huzzah!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
someday_93

Oh, I get it now haha. I’m just not up on my dinosaurs. The kids I’ve babysat remind me of that all the time… I just call them all T-rex, honestly. Or just dinosaurs…
- Posted over 8 years ago.
THX 0477

Great entry into the challenge, pun and all. Cute style to the poem as well.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Abstract

Simply wonderful!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
J. Rein B.

This is awesome! Reminds me of that ever-present illustration of a tyrannosaurus and triceratops fighting it out (and then mysteriously got shopped into Barney and his friend, still fighting)
- Posted over 8 years ago.
cthulhuburger

Tyrant lizards definitely count as tyrants! Hooray for the three-horned uprising!

If I could make one suggestion: “Perplexity is in your eye” somewhat breaks the flow. Points for trying to use “perplexity,” but maybe you should reword that phrase.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Sir Bic

cthulhu, I agree, ‘perplexity’ is not the right word. I’ll see what I can do. – How about “muddlement”? []o)
- Posted over 8 years ago.