I struggled to follow that one. It sort of works in that vagueness, but I’m on the fence. I like the idea, the danger and potential damage of love, sex, and betrayal described as a gun. Also, I’m confused by the ending. Basically, I get the overall point and like it, just a little befuddled.

I gather that there’s some sort of misdirect involved with exactly who is looking down the business end of the gun, but it’s a bit awkward.

Then again, that might not be such a bad thing. The more I think about this story the more it reminds me of David Lynch.

Got it on second read. For some weird reason I’m imagining this to be happening on a stage in a play (probably the “crowd” thing).