Okay. My eyes are tired so go easy. The first, third and fourth paragraphs are meant to be written in present tense. The second and third past tense.

Help me out, “tenses” are something I am working on.

Thanks.

Oh, Nexia, silk milk goats and the depletion of earth’s helium are all factual.

http://www.twotsi.com/pages.php?word=helium%20reserves%20dwindling&act=show

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BioSteel

I don’t know what’s happening, but this story is, as they say, dripping with style.

Thanks cthulhuburger! My goal was to use todays technology and apply it to futuristic sci- fi stories.

Challenge Critique: Good creativity with this one. Not as much action as I would have liked though. Thanks for entering this great story, 32.