Alcohol Depression will get you every time. You should have entered that in the Drinking and Driving challenge. Inter Galactic Drinking and Piloting, watch out for that Black (pot) Hole!
The word “bleated” makes her sound stupid, which I don’t think was meant to be the case. The story puts me in mind of Rutger Hauer’s speech at the end of the Blade Runner film. It doesn’t matter that it’s sci-fi, it just works.
The word “bleated” makes her sound stupid, which I don’t think was meant to be the case.
The story puts me in mind of Rutger Hauer’s speech at the end of the Blade Runner film. It doesn’t matter that it’s sci-fi, it just works.
Challenge Critique: Your characters are wonderful. I would love to read more of this one and get into some action. It’s a shame it has no sequel yet.
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Sir Bic