Wow, that was bittersweet like a chocolate dipped cyanide cherry.

Huh. Raises plenty of questions and has sequel potential. Good choice of tone with the newspaper feel.

Though in the first paragraph, I think you meant “Garrison” when you wrote “Harrison.”

Thank’s for the sharp eyes stovo

I was vacillating between the two names.

nice little story here. I wonder wht happened to the little girl? A sequel could be good, but then, this is good all by itself!

Hmm, a very interesting approach and it was carried out wonderfully. It truly was the story of a fallen hero.