Funny and silly little piece. I liked the down home feel of it, especially the visual/audio for the harried, hushed, whisper-shouting of the frantic old lady on the phone…at least I’m imagining her old.

@THX, this piece is a compilation of fact/fiction based on a box of old photos and news clippings I “adopted” for $40.00 at a yard sale. There is an actual town called Bone Gap, and that alone inspires me to possibly write a book. You can’t get any better than Bone Gap, Stephen King would squeal! I have a hard time focusing on central subjects, I get lost in the asides, Ficly has been great in honing my focus.

I hold your critiques in high regard, a nice kick in the ass.