Well that suggests a whole lot, including loads of questions. Nicely done in so short a space. Might be a bit better with a comma instead of a period at the end of the last dialog—just a thought.
I totally relate. I was chased by a guy that my brother sold baby powder to. Way to scary. This has so many possibilities, at first I thought prostitute, the second time she was his daughter, and the third a beggar but not begging, and fourth mistaken for a drug dealer…I can’t read it anymore… But even after that, you throw a wrench in the works by having him saying “I am (cold) afraid”, now the possibilities are endless. Oh, and why am I to assume he’s giving her money, maybe it’s a badge…stop it!
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