Funny and bizarre, as were both the one after this and those that followed. It doesn’t quite set up as a literal prequel with the guy being dead at the end of yours then asking about the bullets in mind. You could read it as a way-prequel, I guess, that this is the predecessor. Maybe I’m being too literal. It’s a nice take on the vague randomness of mine with more details as to the what and why, so that part works.

My comments:

- This is a great piece on exploring the selective capitalization of first person presonal pronouns.
- This is an interesting time loop of a hunt ending before it begins.
- An innovative exposé on the necessity of commas in certain places that also questions why some grammatical areas shouldn’t have commas.

All in all, not a bad attempt. You have a few points to work on, but there is definitely potential.

Of course you know, this means war.