Classic, straight-forward Old West sort of stuff. Felt a bit stiff, but that might have just been me being overly critical. You’ve got a missing apostrophe or two, so it could use a reread to catch the minor stuff.

i saw that coming! Guess I’ve seen too many western-themed shows..

Thanks, I took inspiration from many things, i knew at the time it would be a bit cliché but it was just something i felt like wrtiting