This is not something to do on Ficly

Show us these characters, don’t tell us

A story is not a list. Learn to write in prose.

Use a spell check and work on your grammar. It makes no sense to write a story if others have to struggle to decipher your mistakes and typos.

Don’t tell your audience anything you could show them.

Read more, and don’t read any junk. This is the best advice anyone can give you. If you want suggestions, just tell me what you like and I’ll find something that you’ll enjoy and that will help your writing.

Why?

Why do you need an intro for what should be a single short story?

Show us your characters through your writing, not through an intro, like you would find on a terrible MTV show.