The only thing worse than bad spelling is text-speak.
Screenplay format is an abomination. It’s especially unsuited to extremely short formats.
So far, absolutely nothing has happened and you’ve already broken it into two stories. The point here is brevity.
You have a lot of room for improvement. Please take my advice and read some quality literature. I’m sure you could be quite good if you put the time in.
J.M.V.