Interesting, I was struck by the idea that this was like a reverse of Cinderella, where the man disappears instead of the lady. It was very well written, but I think you would have given your prose a bit more room to breathe if you separated it into paragraphs.
Interesting, I was struck by the idea that this was like a reverse of Cinderella, where the man disappears instead of the lady.
It was very well written, but I think you would have given your prose a bit more room to breathe if you separated it into paragraphs.
JayDee