Well done, PJ. I really have enjoyed this series and look forward to where you will take it once it leaves the trampoline. I’m not sure if ‘humiliated’ is the right word for the way boys feel about not getting kissed. “Disappointed” may be the better, less emotional word – just a thought.
Very tragic, and I like the continuation of the aquatic them in your titles. It ties it all together nicely despite how much the ficly format chops things up. Will be interesting to see if this winds up being a real love or just two desperate people clinging to one another.
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