The characterization is great. I feel like I know this person. Maybe there’s a little bit of him in me, even. One question, did you read the challenge request? I would love to hear your reasoning on how this fits.

HEy, i don’t understand why this is in THAT challenge. I originally placed this as an entry in the characters challenge, but for some reason it wouldn’t let me enter… and now this? doh! sorry bud.

I fixed it. I must have been out of my head at the time lol. WEll, let’s not consider this an entry, ok?

I commented on the other one. :) Just so ya know.

Challenge Critique: WINNER! – []o)