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The “Trust me,” “Trust me” part of the conversation didn’t work for me, as one weird adventurer meets another, weirder adventurer and they have a weirdness contest.
I like the description of Jenny, though, and I love that Gates thinks of her as a “firecracker.”
I’m interested by the flow of the conversation and the characters, would love to have the hint of more desire/risk in each of these characters. Otherwise it’s just a chat… a fun flirty chat, though.
Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars
Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars
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