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I love the title (Meat Loaf reference?), and the story itself doesn’t disappoint. This was a great place to stop the self-sequels, and I’m glad someone else picked up on the story with what happens next.
It’s a great detail that the ChronoLock looks like “an old chrome mechanical egg timer.”
I like the forward movement on this, and the great mysteries laid out — how did something that he invented get into the hands of this woman he’s never met?