Hmm, I tried adding sequel=1 in the URL but it didn’t work. Oh well…

This is a sequel to http://ficly.com/stories/1

Great last line, and a bizarre, unique scenario among the now many sequels. Hilarious challenge, and this was a great result of the challenge. Thanks for doing a sequel.

I feel like you’ve been playing Portal 2. Funny nonetheless; last line is really nice.

I agree with Stovohobo. I sense quite a lot of GLaDOS on this story! :)

I know that this has been said before, but I feel a lot of GLaDOS in this. Maybe it’s the dead parents thing. Good job, nonetheless.