Don’t worry, I will also try and enter a less morbid character.

There is nothing wrong with a morbid character, especially not one as well written as this. The only criticism I can come up with (and only due to the nature of the challenge) is that I don’t have a clear idea of the character, but then again as a serial killer/psychopath/sociopath (I can never remember which one applies) I get the feeling that he should be a vague impression. It’s scarier that way. On to the compliments: I really liked it. The association of past loves and their specifics seems very real. The second to last paragraph is the best and the most grotesque. The Yin/Yang line is perfect for the separation between the living and the dead. Excellent work.

oh wow, definitely a real scary piece, made my whole body shiver. Especially the last paragraph, that I think was a bit too much for me. Great piece.

Thanks for the comments.

I just feel that I haven’t done any ‘happy’ or light writing recently. But I like the idea of the challenge so I shall wear it out a little

This is a really gruesome piece! I hope it’s not from your personal diary… Ha Ha! <—-nervous laughter

Uh… yeah… total fiction… nervous yet somehow evil laughter

Uh… Hum… Well… (hurriedly clicks someplace else) – []o)

I agree, nothing wrong with a morbid character. Granted, this one made me extraordinarily uncomfortable, but I think that was somehow the point, or at least an expected effect. I ALMOST feel for this character, because I’ve seen how hard it can be to live with autism. Fortunately they don’t all end up like this! Haha. This is really well done, it sort of scares me that you can get into the mind of someone like this! But then, you’re just brilliant like that :p

Ep! A morbid character? Yes. And yet…..so….intriguing? I think thats word I’m looking for. It gives me the chills. And it’s realistic to the point where I can see the news stories of the missing girls flickering in my head! Yikes.

Love the morbidity of this piece. :D Well done.

Perfectly delicious. I love dark and morbid stories, and this one certainly doubles up the creep factor.

This is so unsettling… though brilliantly explanatory— from inside the mind of a killer. 5 stars all the way.