I am honestly not too sure where I am going with this……Or if it’s going anywhere at all! I just felt it needed to be written

Wow, that’s hot! This is a humorous little piece, exploring the plight of a college student. I can see it going somewhere if you keep the same voice. You have some grammatical issues, but hey: Don’t we all? – []o)

Definitely felt the winsome, humdrum feel of a day which really set up nicely for the ominous ending. A typo or two (they instead of the) but nothing major. It might be easier to read broke up into some paragraphs as well. Still, it is an effective voice and a nice set up.

@ Sir Bic: Grammar is one of my biggest weaknesses. :( Hahaha. But admitting it is the first step!

@ THX: I wanted to break it up! But Alas, I believe I had run out of characters! But I will go back and fix my typos. Thanks for the catch. I’m not the best proofreader of my own work. :)