Bizarre scenario to go along with one wild ride of a saga. Nicely done and a heck of a dark twist. I liked the last line, much more telling that just, “I became angry.”

Now were getting somewhere. And now we have a good reason for getting there.

THX, maybe we could call ‘she’, “rage”? – ‘I became rage.’ = “I became she.”?

The italicized and ellipsis-ed memory thing worked really well too. Great job August.

Installment #58 in the main storyline. We’re just chugging right along.

I’ve made a few revisions, consisting entirely of tightening up the writing. The storyline is as it was, but I think it’s a bit less awkward now.

Wow…

Holy shit, August…this was an unnecessary heightening of narrative intensity…but much appreciated! Everything about this is brilliantly drafted, from how she struggled with her alter ego, and wound up with the memory…to it’s description and her transformation into Rage.