Interesting, I like it!

I’m tempted to sequel it with a very literal interpretation of the flash forward mechanic.

No story is complete without time travel.

:P

Go for it, Jonathan!

That was funny, and I liked the shift from what seems inappropriately immature (checking out teenage girls) to something very mature and parental. Nice little moment there.

This is a nice example of a father-to-be’s internal exploration of what sort of father he should be and what sort of man he is. Or maybe it’s just funny? Oh, and twisting a bottle-cap on and off your finger really hurts! ouch – []o).

good read, i like the description of the ring and the unborn teen daughter.