Odd and random. Feels like there’s more meaning or sentiment behind it, but I’m not seeing it today. Writing style is straight forward and neatly done. So, not really finding fault with the piece other than my own failure to discern any deeper meaning.

No real big meaning other than realizing that for months at least during our lives and our parent/grandparent’s lives, there were dead animals floating around in space.

That’s really bizarre to me.

Wait, you mean that’s not made up? Reading it, I just thought it was some sort of bizarre event you’d imagined.

One comment: the line I am missing most of my thigh muscle in my left leg, that was careful dressed in a drab black doesn’t seem to flow quite right. I’m not totally sure what you were going for, but I think it would make more sense to change “that” into “which.” Just for grammatical correctness.

Thank you for the crit Someday!

Before the US and USSR sent man into space they sent all sorts of animals in capsules that were never meant to be retrieved.

Laika the dog quite literally spent here last days on a rocket and then slowly starved to death all the while orbiting the planet.

That’s real F’d up if you think about it