Very tragic and really feels of the hopelessness of his situation.
Second paragraph, last sentence, you forgot the punctuation at the end of the sentence… I could feel all of the emotions of this piece. And some of the things you leave unsaid really make the story – poor Theodore.
Second paragraph, last sentence, you forgot the punctuation at the end of the sentence…
I could feel all of the emotions of this piece. And some of the things you leave unsaid really make the story – poor Theodore.
Great description of this poor fellow and his plight.
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