I really like the pattern of this poem. The triple rhymes with the lines sort of growing longer makes it seem almost like a stream of consciousness, but at the same time, well thought-out (if effortlessly so) and it really flows well. You always write such lovely poetry :)

Oh, a thought – I know you don’t edit once stuff is published but, I think you spelled mesmerized wrong in the title, unless it’s meant to be memorized, like in the last stanza of the poem? I wasn’t sure they were meant to be the same or not, but regardless, the title is still spelled wrong.

Awh thank you! I try… It’s really the only thing that helps me express. :)
And I knew it didn’t look right ><