Comments on The Theater Room by JayDee

ElshaHawk (LoA)

Performance art in words!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
zxvasdf

Jonathan, did you see me there the other day? Either way, I saw you. It was tragic! But this story isn’t, being a stroke of genius.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Bizarre and unsettling. Kept making me think of a Dr Who episode, or a Jethro Tull song, though which one escapes me at the moment. I liked the interjected ‘whispers’, or at least that’s how I read them.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Onion Camp

This is incredible! I totally get the whole Dr. Who vibe that THX mentioned, but also a little e. e. cummings? So beautiful.
- Posted over 8 years ago.
JayDee

Thanks so much guys! I was channeling Doctor Who with all my might, and I’m delighted that it came through!

By the way, this is an awesome idea for a challenge, zxvasdf and I’m already trying to think of other rooms!
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Ooh I love how this is written. Like the whispers of the Silence. Did someone say something? I don’t remember…
- Posted over 8 years ago.
Garsecg

A wonderfully creepy piece. I wonder if they perform the King in Yellow?
- Posted over 8 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
smdasilva {LoA}

Ohh, goosebumps. Nice juxtaposition of the 2 “voices”.
- Posted over 8 years ago.